the package should be something else.because everybody thinks aid's so it should be something else'

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{Chuck nods yes}
Rufus: I cant believe lucious pimped you too
Rufus: thought he only pimped with hos, like gwen, tina, and my wife too
{too echos four times while fading out climatically with each echo}
Chuck: What you mean he pimped your wife
Rufus: she was a rough spot in her life
Chuck: does that make it alright
Rufus: she never did bring me home aids
Rufus: I never really loved you anyway
{chuck sobs}
{chuck continues to weep}
{Chuck balls uncontrollably}
{Rufus conforts chuck}
{Rufus pulls chucks face to his boosom}
{Very young,very black, very fine, female nurse enters room}
Chuck: Damn girl, you could turn a nigga straight
Rufus: Stupid negro, she know you got aids
{Very young,very black, very fine, female nurse, quickly exits room}
{Chuck stands up from wheelchair and reveals a 9.}
<Chuck in threatening tone>
Chuck: these are the words im gonna say
Chuck: before a blow out all your brains
Roofus: Chuck it aint gotta end like this
Roofus: we can work through all this shit
Chuck: that 50$ wasnt worth this pain
Chuck: rev mosley paid me for a one night stay
Roofus: is that where you got yo aids
Chuck: yes, but its time to end this game
{game echos eight times while fading out more and more with each echo}
{Roofus frantically jumps at chuck to try to disarm him}
{BOOm!}
(Gunshot)
Scene fades out

let me know what you think of dis scrip, i was tryin to sleep but i couldn cuz i jus had all deez scenarioz runnin threw my mind so i hate to get some out. maybe i can sleep now, peace

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