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i want tina to see pimp lucius i want twan to have the packege i want chuck to die and then rufus loves the cop (james) and then bridget finds out and then james falls in love with rufus then bridget gets the double barrel and pow bridget starts to cry she shot james but just in the sholder now back to tina and pimp lucius then they start arguing then roxane comes she pulls out a knife then bishup craig comes they all start arguing roxane is swinging the knife at pimp lucius and cuts his coat and twan comes comes and sais tina is with me tina looks at twan twan looks at tina roxane looks at both of them she starts swinging at twan twan starts sneezing gwen starts yelling stop
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| chocolatelaboratory | my script part 2 | 0 | Mar 23 2008, 5:03 AM EDT by chocolatelaboratory | |
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{Chuck nods yes}
Rufus: I cant believe lucious pimped you too Rufus: thought he only pimped with hos, like gwen, tina, and my wife too {too echos four times while fading out climatically with each echo} Chuck: What you mean he pimped your wife Rufus: she was a rough spot in her life Chuck: does that make it alright Rufus: she never did bring me home aids Rufus: I never really loved you anyway {chuck sobs} {chuck continues to weep} {Chuck balls uncontrollably} {Rufus conforts chuck} {Rufus pulls chucks face to his boosom} {Very young,very black, very fine, female nurse enters room} Chuck: Damn girl, you could turn a nigga straight Rufus: Stupid negro, she know you got aids {Very young,very black, very fine, female nurse, quickly exits room} {Chuck stands up from wheelchair and reveals a 9.} <Chuck in threatening tone> Chuck: these are the words im gonna say Chuck: before a blow out all your brains Roofus: Chuck it aint gotta end like this Roofus: we can work through all this shit Chuck: that 50$ wasnt worth this pain Chuck: rev mosley paid me for a one night stay Roofus: is that where you got yo aids Chuck: yes, but its time to end this game {game echos eight times while fading out more and more with each echo} {Roofus frantically jumps at chuck to try to disarm him} {BOOm!} (Gunshot) Scene fades out let me know what you think of dis scrip, i was tryin to sleep but i couldn cuz i jus had all deez scenarioz runnin threw my mind so i hate to get some out. maybe i can sleep now, peace
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| chocolatelaboratory | my script | 0 | Mar 23 2008, 5:00 AM EDT by chocolatelaboratory | |
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Chaper 22.5
[Scene 1] {Rufus enters hospital door, Rufus and Chuckare in hospital} Rufus: Chuck how the helld you get in here Chuck: Roofus i got somethings i need to get off my chest Rufus: Chuck you lookin like you is a damn mess Chuck: Roofus i love, you know you are my baby Rufus: Look chuck, its just like i explained Chuck: please dont speak another word Chuck: i never meant to hurt Rufus: chuck what you talkin bout Rufus: did you run off to the papers runnin your mouth Chuck: no but i got something important to say Chuck: something i ran in your a Rufus: oh shit, nigga - is it aids?!? [CHUCK WEEPS, AND NODS HEAD YES] Rufus: damn chuck who is it you screwin Rufus: is it more than me, which youve been doin Chuck: Rufus, you know my money aint straight Chuck: and i just had to make my pay Rufus: Chuck who have you been working for Chuck: the thing is, pimp lucious made me a whore Rufus: you mean lucious who be sitting in my pew
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| kellz#1fan | WHAT SHOULD HAPPEN NEXT | 1 | Mar 13 2008, 3:03 PM EDT by itsdynomyte | |
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CHAPTER 23:
REVEAL HOW JAMES KNOWS CHUCK AND RUFUS: JAMES THE POLICE OFFICER WAS INVOLVED IN A BATH HOUSE STING TO BUST UP AN ILLEGAL MALE PROSTITUTING RING AND BOTH CHUCK AND RUFUS ARE BUSTED BUT IS RELEASED BY JAMES BECAUSE HIS MOTHER IS A MEMBER OF RUFUS' CHURCH. CHAPTER 24: SLYVESTER ARRIVES HOME AND TRIES TO CALM HIS WORRIED WIFE BECAUSE SHES AFRAID THE PACKAGE IS A DEADLY DISEASE THAT SLYVESTER CAUGHT FROM KATHY BUT SHE IS MORE PISSED THAN WORRIED AND BLAMES SLYVESTER FOR EVERYTHING. HE TRIES TO EXPLAIN BUT SHE SLAPS HIS FACE AND START THROWING THINGS AT HIM. HE GRABS HOLD OF HER WHILE YELLING HE NEVER SLEPT WITH KATHY IT WAS ALL STAGED TO BRING OUT THE TRUTH ABOUT THE CHEATING PASTOR. CHAPTER 25: ROSIE THE NOSEY NEIGHBOR ACCEPTS A COLLECT CALL FROM ODELL TO COME AND BAIL HIM OUT OF JAIL. THEN REVEAL THAT ODELL AND ROSIE HAVE BEEN HAVING AN AFFAIR FOR THE PAST 5 YEARS. CHAPTER 26: THE NEXT NIGHT EVERYBODY GETS SUITED AND BOOTED AND FALL UP IN THE CLUB. THE CLUB IS PACKED BECAUSE THE SPECIAL GUEST THAT NIGHT WILL BE PERFORMING FOR ONE NIGHT ONLY AND ITS R. KELLY AS HIMSELF. TWAN HAD CALLED THE CLUB EARLIER THAT DAY TO RESERVE A BOOTH IN VIP BUT WHEN TWAN AND SLYVESTER SHOW UP, THE VIP SECTION IS FULL AND IS OCCUPIED BY PIMP LUCIUS AND A FEW OF HIS HOES. BUT THE MAJORITY OF THE SECTION IS FILLED WITH BIG MAN AND A GRIP OF HIS MIDGET COUSINS. CHAPTER 27: THURSDAY 12 MIDNIGHT SLYVESTER AND TWAN SHOWS UP TO MEET THE TRAIN FROM INDIANA ALONG WITH JOEY'S BOYS PLANNING TO JACK A TRAIN CAR FULL OF GOVERNMENT ISSUED EQUIPMENT BELONGING TO THE U.S MENT TO MAKE AUTHENTIC U.S CURRENCY. THE EQUIPMENT ALONG WITH CASES OF AUTHENTIC PAPER USED TO MAKE OUR AMERICAN CURRENCY IS NOT TRACABLE BECAUSE IT HADN'T MADE IT THROUGH CUSTOMS YET. JOEY ALONG WITH SLYVESTER AND TWAN WALK AWAY SCOTT-FREE AND MULTI-MILLIONAIRS. |
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| itsdynomyte | wrench in the plan | 0 | Mar 12 2008, 3:08 PM EDT by itsdynomyte | |
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Well I also thought Mr. Biggs would enter the fray next....but now that his parole has been denied Ron Isley has to served the rest of the 3 years on his sentence. Any Kellz wants to get this down before a possibility of anything happening to him.
I think the package think was all a makeup on Randolph, because he knows Rosie will spread it like wildfire. Chapter 24 Chuck is in the hospital because he was in a beatdown....but he doesn't know who ambushed him. Meanwhile Sylvester goes to visit his momma Myrna, only to find out Pops is in jail, and Myrna gets into it with Twan, saying she knows his probation officer. The actual spreading about the package is from the other policeman that answered the phone for James....look closed in the last chapter, his ring didn't go all the way away, he picked back up and listened in on the conversation. Also he sound a lot like Dominic, so I'm thinking they are either brothers or cousins. The contact of inside info Dominic has with the Chicago PD is going to alter the plans of the train from Indiana. Just when Dominic think he is scott free and pulled one over on Sylvester, Odell is released by Sgt. James, once it is figured out the connection, to foil the plot. While in jail for few, Odell finds out a few things about his son's bro-in-law Twan. The day after the Thursday nite train from Indiana (chapter 28), at the Par'jay club everybody is there fighting in VIP, Tina becomes a nervous wreck because she comes face to face once again with Pimp Luscious, and Bishop Craig, they ones who gave her the eye condition. While Sylvester was in prison, he learns that Gwen once was one of Pimp Luscious' hoes, that's how she knows Roxanne and Tina. When Dominic finds out Sylvester is at the Par'jay, his entourage rolls up in the to confront him about the what happened. Just when the Joey and Dominic pull guns on everybody, he comes Street and his Crew to handle things.
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| hilliard2011 | what shouldhappen totwanansslyvester | 0 | Nov 12 2007, 4:44 PM EST by hilliard2011 | |
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twan andslyvester leave the diner and twan is feeling mighty low because of tina and roxanne they dont make it home to gwen because they go to figure out what to do in the club
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